Wednesday 18 September 2019
Day 1: The Greatest Library
Silently, the girl starts to read her book about Alice In Wonderland, when suddenly her imagination comes to life and the books starts disapearing. There is loads of clutter, slowly she starts to slip away into the book then she knew this was no ordinary library.After she goes through a spiral of colour and fun she wonders what book she was reading, then it came to her she was reading Alice in Wonderland!! she didn't finish her book so she does not know what to expect.The only thing she remembers is the Queen Of Hearts/The Red Queen, But what she doesn't know is that the Queen Of Hearts/The Red Queen is EVIL.Once he ges there it all come back to her she says "This isn't real im just in a book" she thought that but one thing she did not know was that i was all real but to get out of this book someone had to come and read the book she was reading to set her free.....TO BE CONTINUED
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Hi Bella. Well done on using an -ly starter to begin your writing. I also like how you have used the word 'cluttered' to describe the books. Could you go on further to describe this? e.g. books stacked from floor to ceiling... I would like you to go back and read your writing. Check that your sentences are not too long. Instead of using a comma, a full stop may be needed. Keep up the great writing.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora, Nicole its me Bella
ReplyDeleteThank you for the wonderful comment. I will make sure to fix my writing and go over it.What is one thing you would change about this sentence?
Blog ya later,
Bella