My Sir Edmund Hillary Sick Sentences!!

 The Normal Version

The man walked up the slope. He used poles. The sun was bright. The sky was blue. He looked forward to the view from the top

Improved Version   

As the man walked up the slippery slope, He used poles. The Blazing sun was bright and the blue sky was cloudy but faint. He looked forward to the view from the top.

I Hope you Enjoyed.