My Jean Batten Sick Sentences!!

This is my improvement on the sick sentences I was provided😊

Original

The plane went through the sky. It was cloudy, The wind blew

Improvements

Flabbergasted,the small plane soared through the mist of the clouds,as the dog felt the wind in his fur and the girl felt the harsh breeze through her hair.The wind blew harshly,so harsh you could get whip lash from just twisting your neck.

Hope you enjoyed it.😁